[MelancholyFae]

With Zark's help: (all edits are in blue. including previous ones. Otherwise explanations are in the previous post.)

Explained the beginning of their journey a bit more; dealing with the food shortage.

Explained that the small village was small, mixed with Mesalians, and is secluded and self-sustaining. Mentioned that the map given to Lyrxi by Sidian is how they found it.

Explained how the failure to find help for Ravenna affected her at the end of the journey.

Edited more to the end to mention the boat travel back toward Ravenna, stopping at Alroc along the way, can explain their speed.