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[APPROVED] Character Submission: Arkon
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Hi Lucky,

I see what you mean, I'd intended to make it more clear that the soldiers were sorta secluded and on their own, so easy enough to dispatch when not expecting it. Also that there weren't quite as many as the wording made it seem. I've corrected and added a bit to make it more obvious what happens, and reduced the amount of guards in both scenarios, also added in another fight in chapter 8, so that he doesn't quite get off scott free as it were. Everything should be highlighted in green.
  


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RE: Character Submission: Arkon - by cerberus23 - 23-11-2016, 04:47 AM
RE: Character Submission: Arkon - by LuckyLeaf - 24-11-2016, 06:26 AM
RE: Character Submission: Arkon - by cerberus23 - 24-11-2016, 12:56 PM
RE: Character Submission: Arkon - by LuckyLeaf - 24-11-2016, 08:01 PM

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