[Demotheus]

Alright. This is it.

*crosses fingers*

I put in a separate sort of subsection within the personality section for complexities that are more specific. There are some listed in the main personality as well. The additional section is for those not outright mentioned.

And sorry for the run on paragraph...not good at english : p

[Michelle]

You know, if you can recognise a run-on paragraph, you could just attempt to fix it instead of apologising for it.

This really could have been done better, and I wish you took more time on it (you posted 7.5 hours after I posted, which isn't a lot of time), but this is enough improvement to deem it as a pass.

Congratulations. Moving to the character sheets section.

[Demotheus]