[Demotheus]

Alright, after realizing I'm just regurgitating the same stuff over and over again I can't figure out exactly what I'm missing. Even after reading Zarkaylia's personality I still don't know what I'm missing, as he's still young and has room to develop his personality further. Can you provide anything more specific as to what I'm missing or things that I need to go more in depth on?

I'm just not good at this, no matter how much I want to be, unfortunately. >.> sorry.