[Michelle]

Excellent. This is the only point in my previous post which still applies to your application:

3. Your character’s personality requires more detail overall. You have a good start, but your character could use a little more individuality, variety and complexity. Please consider these aspects of your character, and elaborate on them. Also, please note point 2d).

Although the pieces you have written do flesh out your character more, her personality isn't completely explicit. Remember, the key is minimal gaps and unanswered questions. Please update your character's personality notes with more elaboration.

And lastly, I should tell you that mobs are IC in the Middle Realm; they're called dusk creatures, or dusk spawn, or any other variation involving 'dusk'. They're more or less considered a completely normal, but dangerous occurrence of the night. Because of this, it follows that your character should realistically have some kind of protective escort with her up until she arrives at the setting, unless you'd prefer her to enter the setting injured (which is fine). Please state your decision and revise your application accordingly.

That's all. Good luck.