09-05-2013, 06:49 AM
One last thing.
They lost a few to the dusk creatures. Mostly deckhands and washboys who'd wandered off into the night to relieve themselves. But they kept following the beacons, until they mounted the final hill as the sun began to set.
It was her first time seeing a town this big.
This implies that your character will be arriving with some sort of NPC group rather than alone. I'm sorry if my last post confused you; your character must arrive to the setting (that is, the town) alone, but she may be escorted up until that point. You will have to think of a way for your character to be alone; perhaps the crew she was with weren't as interested in the forbidden lands as she was.
That's all. Good luck.
They lost a few to the dusk creatures. Mostly deckhands and washboys who'd wandered off into the night to relieve themselves. But they kept following the beacons, until they mounted the final hill as the sun began to set.
It was her first time seeing a town this big.
This implies that your character will be arriving with some sort of NPC group rather than alone. I'm sorry if my last post confused you; your character must arrive to the setting (that is, the town) alone, but she may be escorted up until that point. You will have to think of a way for your character to be alone; perhaps the crew she was with weren't as interested in the forbidden lands as she was.
That's all. Good luck.
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