Alright, Rand, this looks like the last round.
Almost there.
- It's been decided that one more skill needs to be taken down a level. I'd recommend that you take down fletchery, since there wouldn't be a huge difference in the quality of the arrow.
- Finally the personality description can do with some more detail. A second paragraph will fill this requirement. If you need some inspiration, check around the accepted sheets.
Almost there.

