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Remilia "Earthheart" Aspen
#9
Ahh, alright North. It's fine, I'm a bit patient.
  • I have gone ahead and made backstory bits clearer and explained through a few sentences. I initially thought it looked implied, but there you go. Changes are made in Yellow.

  • Cartography has been reduced down to Competent. Science has been split into a couple of skills, appropriately ranked in skill.

  • I Have added an actual bit where the ship actually stops at Alroc. Also in Yellow.
  


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Remilia "Earthheart" Aspen - by Dark - 30-03-2014, 11:32 PM
RE: [WIP] Remilia "Earthheart" Aspen - by Dark - 31-03-2014, 07:45 PM
RE: [WIP] Remilia "Earthheart" Aspen - by Dark - 01-04-2014, 12:55 AM
RE: [WIP] Remilia "Earthheart" Aspen - by Dark - 01-04-2014, 09:55 PM
RE: [WIP] Remilia "Earthheart" Aspen - by Dark - 03-04-2014, 12:40 AM
RE: [NEW] Remilia "Earthheart" Aspen - by Hutchy - 04-04-2014, 04:12 PM
RE: [NEW] Remilia "Earthheart" Aspen - by Dark - 05-04-2014, 12:28 AM
RE: [NEW] Remilia "Earthheart" Aspen - by Hutchy - 06-04-2014, 06:53 PM
RE: [NEW] Remilia "Earthheart" Aspen - by Dark - 06-04-2014, 08:01 PM
RE: Remilia "Earthheart" Aspen - by Dark - 10-04-2014, 12:56 PM
RE: Remilia "Earthheart" Aspen - by Dark - 15-04-2014, 10:20 PM

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