08-04-2014, 05:25 PM
OK, big improvement, but there's one last thing.
'She was to begin, instead of the home works of many, to be taught in the maths and sciences as she was the only child of Simon.' It's still unclear how this makes a difference to what she's made to learn. Please add a little more clarification here.
'She was to begin, instead of the home works of many, to be taught in the maths and sciences as she was the only child of Simon.' It's still unclear how this makes a difference to what she's made to learn. Please add a little more clarification here.