12-07-2016, 08:37 PM
Right, sorry for the delay, I was held up by work.
So my question for the second round is: how did an 8 year old urchin survive as a mercenary?
I'm not quite sure if clients would readily pick young girls for such tasks, regardless of how capable she is.
Perhaps you could expand the story to explain that?
Also, I'd like to suggest the reopening of the portal to the Dusk Realm, and the emergence of dragons as possible events in her life as well, if you feel up for it.
That's it for now, bump the thread once you're done!
So my question for the second round is: how did an 8 year old urchin survive as a mercenary?
I'm not quite sure if clients would readily pick young girls for such tasks, regardless of how capable she is.
Perhaps you could expand the story to explain that?
Also, I'd like to suggest the reopening of the portal to the Dusk Realm, and the emergence of dragons as possible events in her life as well, if you feel up for it.
That's it for now, bump the thread once you're done!