[LuckyLeaf]

Hey there, so sorry for the late reply, but staff was generally busy irl , and I wanted to do your app justice.

So, let's get right to it.

First off, just so you know, Adam doesn't need to leave the forbidden lands, the setting is there, so he just needs to find his way into our town.

Secondly, lorewise you're fine, the timeline seems alright as well. Just remember that the portal to the Dusk realm reopened and dragons emerged, seemingly out of nowhere.

Now, a question: how did Adam survive all alone, away from civilization? As far as I can see, he doesn't know the difference between magic shrooms and truffles. I asume he lived off fruits amd stuff, but just clarify for me, if you please.

And lastly, the skills. Now the expert level tags require 15 years of experience, that is experience outside learning the craft. So if Adam spent 15 years learning, from the age of 5, and had 15 more years to practice, it would work, if he wasn't competent with a bow as well. So if you want to stick with two combat skills, you could remove the bow skill, or put his swordmanship down to Advanced.

I think that is all for now, please bump the thread once you're done.