05-11-2017, 12:52 PM
(05-11-2017, 11:58 AM)Hutchy Wrote: Alright, Sank, next round.
Just one point here too, there appears to be no justification in your backstory for the hunting skill. Please either add a reason why he would have this skill, or remove it.
That's all for now. Post again in this thread when you've made your changes and we can continue from there.
Edited. That's what the edit from age 11-14 was that I said before. I added a bit more detail to it this time.