12-03-2018, 04:23 PM
Hey Cinnamonium! Fire here. I'll be grading your application. Thank you for applying to Mesalia RP.
I need you to touch up on some things in your application before I can approve you.
Lore: I want you to go into more detail about your character's involvement with the lore. You can read the lore of Mesalia here: https://www.mesalia.net/forum/lore.php
And here is a nice Timeline cheat sheet: https://www.mesalia.net/forum/showthread.php?tid=963
State how/when your character was involved with these lore events. If Johnathan wasn't involved, state why he wasn't. At the least, I should know what Johnathan thought of the events he lived to know of.
Growing Up: Please go into more detail on Johnathan's life and upbringing. Right now, I know he just grew up on a farm with his father. Please tell me more about his family, friends, etc. I don't need to know every possible detail, but give me a sense of what growing up was like. Feel free to get creative. Was there a village nearby? A childhood friend? etc.
Also, the mercenary character, please let me know what he was like. Why did the mercenary need shelter? Did him and Johnathan get along initially? Give me the details.
Skills: I would tone down the Expert farming to Advanced, mostly so you can see that growth in RP interactions and in-game play. Also, please give more specific descriptions of each of the skills. What is Johnathan reasonably able to do with them?
Once again, thank you for applying to Mesalia! Please let me know in the thread when you've made your edits.
I need you to touch up on some things in your application before I can approve you.
Lore: I want you to go into more detail about your character's involvement with the lore. You can read the lore of Mesalia here: https://www.mesalia.net/forum/lore.php
And here is a nice Timeline cheat sheet: https://www.mesalia.net/forum/showthread.php?tid=963
State how/when your character was involved with these lore events. If Johnathan wasn't involved, state why he wasn't. At the least, I should know what Johnathan thought of the events he lived to know of.
Growing Up: Please go into more detail on Johnathan's life and upbringing. Right now, I know he just grew up on a farm with his father. Please tell me more about his family, friends, etc. I don't need to know every possible detail, but give me a sense of what growing up was like. Feel free to get creative. Was there a village nearby? A childhood friend? etc.
Also, the mercenary character, please let me know what he was like. Why did the mercenary need shelter? Did him and Johnathan get along initially? Give me the details.
Skills: I would tone down the Expert farming to Advanced, mostly so you can see that growth in RP interactions and in-game play. Also, please give more specific descriptions of each of the skills. What is Johnathan reasonably able to do with them?
Once again, thank you for applying to Mesalia! Please let me know in the thread when you've made your edits.