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[Trashed] Application - Cinnamonium
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In Game Name (IGN):
[Cinnamonium]

How did you find us? (Forums, friend, previous member, etc…)
[Some forum about roleplaying servers]

About You: 
[I'm very enthusiastic about roleplaying, but I haven't done it too much. I'd love to learn more.]

CHARACTER INFORMATION

Name: 
[Jonathan Cropstar]

Age: 
[38]

Gender: 
[Male]

Appearance: 
[physically fit, a bit smarter than a regular peasant, 177cm tall, great stamina, tanned,
average eyesight, bass-y voice, has scars on his hands, back, chest and over his left eye.]

Personality: 
[Calm, relaxed, humorous, romantic, hardworking]

Backstory: 
[Spent his entire childhood and teen-hood under his father's wing, on their family farm.
His mother passed away giving birth to Jonathan.
When Jonathan was a young adult, aged 18, he went hunting with his father for the first time,
and he has hunted ever since, but he hadn't had too much education on the subject, since
his father passed away in the woods when a bear attacked Jonathan's father, and scratched
Jonathan's left eye. Jonathan has ever since been the head of Cropstar Farm.
When Jonathan had been the head of Cropstar Farm, a traveling mercenary passed through his land, asking for shelter.
During his being there, the mercenary taught Jonathan how to wield an axe in combat.]

Capabilities: 
[expert farmer, competent hunter, novice axe-wielder]

Items: 
[Iron Axe, Farmer's tools and clothing, Bow and Arrows]

Additional Comments:
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#2
Hey Cinnamonium! Fire here. I'll be grading your application. Thank you for applying to Mesalia RP. 

I need you to touch up on some things in your application before I can approve you.

Lore: I want you to go into more detail about your character's involvement with the lore. You can read the lore of Mesalia here: https://www.mesalia.net/forum/lore.php
And here is a nice Timeline cheat sheet: https://www.mesalia.net/forum/showthread.php?tid=963
State how/when your character was involved with these lore events. If Johnathan wasn't involved, state why he wasn't. At the least, I should know what Johnathan thought of the events he lived to know of. 


Growing Up: Please go into more detail on Johnathan's life and upbringing. Right now, I know he just grew up on a farm with his father. Please tell me more about his family, friends, etc. I don't need to know every possible detail, but give me a sense of what growing up was like. Feel free to get creative. Was there a village nearby? A childhood friend? etc.
 Also, the mercenary character, please let me know what he was like. Why did the mercenary need shelter? Did him and Johnathan get along initially? Give me the details.

Skills: I would tone down the Expert farming to Advanced, mostly so you can see that growth in RP interactions and in-game play. Also, please give more specific descriptions of each of the skills. What is Johnathan reasonably able to do with them?

Once again, thank you for applying to Mesalia! Please let me know in the thread when you've made your edits.
#3
Trashed due to inactivity. Feel free to reapply.
  


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