18-05-2018, 01:43 PM
Hello, Monarch. Fire's taken the other app while my internet craps out, so hopefully I'll be able to take you through whitelisting in record speed.
You've almost got all the lore relation we ask applicants to put in their backstories, but there's just the two points you need to address. As well as the Civil War, we ask applicants to address the point of the Duck Portal reopening as it's quite the significant event.
Also, you should consider that depending where Maggie's coming from, the journey to Nightveil is usually several months by boat. That naturally also means access to any bank is very unlikely.
I also need to ask about the skill's you've chosen. While it's clear you've understood the format and rules behind them, it looks like you've graded the general categories rather than individual skills. You need not do this, nor feel restricted to choosing skills from those categories. For example, instead of 'Fine Arts', your character can have 'Poetry' and 'Writing' as skills. Just a quick note before I leave this one off, on this server it's a given that most characters can read and write to an good degree, so it's not needed to list them as skills, only if they're either better or worse than a literate person do they need mentioning, really, but that's up to you.
That's all I have for you right now. Bump this thread or yell at me in Discord when you've made your edits, and we'll continue from there. Bonus points for highlighting your edits in a different colour!
You've almost got all the lore relation we ask applicants to put in their backstories, but there's just the two points you need to address. As well as the Civil War, we ask applicants to address the point of the Duck Portal reopening as it's quite the significant event.
Also, you should consider that depending where Maggie's coming from, the journey to Nightveil is usually several months by boat. That naturally also means access to any bank is very unlikely.
I also need to ask about the skill's you've chosen. While it's clear you've understood the format and rules behind them, it looks like you've graded the general categories rather than individual skills. You need not do this, nor feel restricted to choosing skills from those categories. For example, instead of 'Fine Arts', your character can have 'Poetry' and 'Writing' as skills. Just a quick note before I leave this one off, on this server it's a given that most characters can read and write to an good degree, so it's not needed to list them as skills, only if they're either better or worse than a literate person do they need mentioning, really, but that's up to you.
That's all I have for you right now. Bump this thread or yell at me in Discord when you've made your edits, and we'll continue from there. Bonus points for highlighting your edits in a different colour!