04-05-2013, 07:15 PM
You know, if you can recognise a run-on paragraph, you could just attempt to fix it instead of apologising for it.
This really could have been done better, and I wish you took more time on it (you posted 7.5 hours after I posted, which isn't a lot of time), but this is enough improvement to deem it as a pass.
Congratulations. Moving to the character sheets section.
This really could have been done better, and I wish you took more time on it (you posted 7.5 hours after I posted, which isn't a lot of time), but this is enough improvement to deem it as a pass.
Congratulations. Moving to the character sheets section.
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