[Michelle]

Don’t ever apologise for taking a long time, French. I’d rather good quality in two days than poor quality in two minutes. Always feel free to take as much time as you need (but do notify us if you need more than three days so we know you’re not inactive).
This is mostly sufficient; you’re on the right track. The only points which still apply are six and seven in my previous post. You need to justify the character’s extreme ambition and selfish tendencies more; what was it that made him think and act this way? Please refer to those points and revise.
That’s all. Good luck.

[French_Fri]

edited, to what seemed to fit what was needed....unless I'm missing something...

[Michelle]

The only thing I can nitpick from here is that his dead wife/significant other isn't given a name. If you're going to name the character's parents, then you should at probably also name other people significant to him.

When you've done that, consider this approved.

[French_Fri]

Edited (I don't feel I deserve cookies for this though)

[Michelle]

Approved, and learn to take a compliment! This is clearly a step-up in your understanding of character.