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Round Three FIGHT

Estelle was born in the winter months in the healing clinic of Ravenna

Ravenna where? Pretend I dont know this is the setting.

At this time her brother also came back from his travels giving her someone else to play with who she considered ‘not adults’.

Who is her brother and who is this Thomas listed later?

Novice: Self Defense

A short discription of her capablities please.

She often felt a little ashamed of having the powers, and even as she grows older she still doesn’t like using them in public places.

Estelle learned a lot from her mother about her warrior traits, such as honor and loyalty. Estelle followed in her mothers teaching, not willing to lie to others.

May want to expand on this in her personality section.

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Edited again.

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I think that's about as good as it can get given the character is born in the Forbidden Lands. Accepted.