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Servitude and Sorrow
#1
You're wondering what this is. Well, basically this is going to be a co-written story by myself and River involving a couple of our potential characters in the universe of Mesalia. Specifically, this story will take place in the Twin Rivers setting, the far eastern island nations of warriors.

This is somewhat of an RP, but myself and River do talk together to help guide the plotline and it's direction, mostly an exercise for us to give depth to our character ideas and flesh out their personalities.

Also, we hope this to be an entertaining read for you all. My parts will be in blue, her parts will be in red.

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#2
Can I recommend changing your colours somewhat... Against the background of the spoiler the blue is very hard on the eyes, and the red is not much better... By all means use them, but try more muted colours, it'll make it far easier to read.
#3
Took your advise, revised it a bit.
  


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