[Accepted] Return of Koi

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[Accepted] Return of Koi

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03-03-2014, 06:11 PM

Hey Stez! Good work, but I still have a little niggle~

Quote:Save for the loss of their mast.

There's a lot of ways to disable a ships ability to sail. The mast is a single huge log of wood, I can’t imagine it breaking without tipping the ship over or smashing holes through the middle of the decks. Maybe the yard could be broken or the sail torn off with no hope of repair? Or maybe this is some sort of illusion to the sort of issue I’m thinking. I don’t know. Could you correct or clarify this for me?

Just this last issue, I'm not sure if it is an issue or if I'm not comprehending your writing, just to be sure a bit of clarification would be dandy! Thanks.

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[Accepted] Return of Koi - by 3llusive - 23-02-2014, 07:51 AM

RE: [NEW] Return of Koi - by SentaiPink - 02-03-2014, 11:44 AM

RE: [Pending] Return of Koi - by 3llusive - 03-03-2014, 01:00 PM

RE: [Pending] Return of Koi - by SentaiPink - 03-03-2014, 06:11 PM

RE: [Pending] Return of Koi - by 3llusive - 03-03-2014, 06:21 PM

RE: [Pending] Return of Koi - by SentaiPink - 03-03-2014, 07:33 PM

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