[Federico]

In Game Name(IGN):
kunst1998

Why do you want to join?
I want to join the server because I have been looking for a roleplay server like this for a long time, and I like to play roleplay (though i'm new to it) I like the ideas with building up a community and create a new life.

Do you have any RP'ing experience?
No, only a little. (GTA)

Tell us a bit about yourself:
My real name is Frederik. I choose my character to be named Federico, just to give it a little twist. I'm 14, almost 15. Born and raised in Denmark. I like to travel, and explore, no matter if it is in a game or in real life. I like to meet new people from different cultures and countrys, and I'm planing to work and live in another country when I get to choose a careere sooner in real life.

Your Character Biography:
Federico is a 22 year old armorer. He is from a little family from a town that was controlled by the Xitians. All the family he had got killed in the civil-wars, besides his mother. His mother raised him good, and teached him to be good to people and never give up. Hs mother died when he was 12. From there, he lived on his own on the streets with no shelter nor food. When he turned 18, he had enough money to travel to the Forbidden Land, and so he did. He is also growing his own food in his backyard. For years he made weapons and armore for the people he lived with, and for those who want to buy his works. He do also give lessons in use of weapons. He is the only one of his family out there, and all alone..

Specify your character's skills:
He is skilled at using weapons and making amorer. He is not very skilled to grow his own food, but he is moving forward. He is most skilled with a Bow and an Arrow, but he do also know ho to handle a sword. He is crafting his own weapons and amore from the finest products.

Do your character bring anything to the setting (part from clothes)?
He do wear my finest clothes all time.

Anything you'd like to add:
He is friendly to any type of person who's approaching him, and he do like guests because of his lonely life in his past.

Here you have my EDITED application, looking forward to be on the whitelist. Sorry for my bad english. Cheers.

[Michelle]

Welcome to Mesalia. I'm Michelle, and I'll be reviewing your application.

1. You seem to be under the impression that a character must be named after or similar to you. That's not the case. Also, there isn't a need to write in first person for backstories and character details. There are other options.
2. From the whitelist application format: "Only Moderators and Administrators may be of Lucin or Xitian blood in any form." Please revise your application accordingly. I suggest reading the application format thread more thoroughly.
3. Your character's backstory also requires more relation to the lore of Mesalia. Did any of the events mentioned effect him? If so, how? If not, why? Also, your character's backstory must end with them arriving at the forbidden lands alone, as this is where the RP is set. Please revise this.
4. More detail is required overall, particularly in regards to your character's personality. Please elaborate on it, and consider how evidence in his backstory would support his personality.
5. Your character's skill set needs to be more exhaustive. It says he can use weapons. Which weapons, and how skilled is he?

Your English isn't bad; it's sound. The issues in your application are mostly in relation to content and detail. I also suggest you browse through here on our old forum for examples of what we're looking for.

That's all. Good luck.

[Federico]

I just edited my application.

[TinyTim77]

[Federico]

I'm sorry